Heartless

Subject: Heartless Fri Jul 18, 2008 12:57 pm

I didn't use a full tut, but I used the brushes and pieces of the Forsaken Mage tut on GIMPTalk to help me out:

Rate and give criticism. I have the .XCF still, so I can add/take out.
~Egaro
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Subject: Re: Heartless Fri Jul 18, 2008 1:02 pm

6.5/10
Needs a better render because it's too dull.
You used the Fractal brushes a lot so make it less.
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Subject: Re: Heartless Fri Jul 18, 2008 3:34 pm

5/10. Mysterious and nice but just looks like a purple and blue blob. Sorry.
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Subject: Re: Heartless Fri Jul 18, 2008 3:43 pm

It is a purple and blue blob, more or less; played Kingdom Hearts before? It's basically a shadow bug thing, very little shape to it.
~Egaro
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Subject: Re: Heartless Sat Jul 19, 2008 7:15 am

Nice. 6/10
Not very good.
I don't like how you can't see the shadow's anteni and the big one in the back looks... odd.
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Subject: Re: Heartless Sat Jul 19, 2008 9:05 am

Well the tag itself is too dark and it needs something more. Blend in the render too eg.
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Subject: Re: Heartless Sat Jul 19, 2008 9:17 am

Subject: Re: Heartless Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:13 am

I suggest adding some more effects, maybe make it less dark aswell. The render fits in but I just feel its missing something. I'd take away the layer of black and add some effects in there, something that will make it stand out.

Thanks, Flubby.
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Subject: Re: Heartless Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:17 am

I think I might take out the large Heartless, it doesn't look good in this sig.

I still have the .xcf, so I can still work with this, which I will do.
~Egaro
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Subject: Re: Heartless Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:22 am

Yeah, you may want to take out the duplicate. When your going to make a faded duplicate of your render I suggest you don't make it stand out too much. You want to make it visible but you want other effects to overlap it. Just so its not the main effect of the tag.

Thanks, Flubby.
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