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|  Subject: Into the Light!  Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:58 am | |
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Flubby
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| | Subject: Re: Into the Light! Sat Jul 19, 2008 11:02 am | |
| Its not your best Cj. Too bright, mono-toned, it also lacks contrast and color.
I suggest toning down the light, adding some more effective colors, maybe just do a gradient map to give it some color. For most part its whited out, the text could use some fixing up to. It needs alot of adjustments.
I know you can do better. 
5/10.
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| | Subject: Re: Into the Light! Sat Jul 19, 2008 11:03 am | |
| | Flubby wrote: | Its not your best Cj. Too bright, mono-toned, it also lacks contrast and color.
I suggest toning down the light, adding some more effective colors, maybe just do a gradient map to give it some color. For most part its whited out, the text could use some fixing up to. It needs alot of adjustments.
I know you can do better.
5/10. |
Same opinion exactly, too bright could use a GM.
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