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| Subject: Into the Light! Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:58 am | |
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Flubby Powerful Penguin


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| Subject: Re: Into the Light! Sat Jul 19, 2008 11:02 am | |
| Its not your best Cj. Too bright, mono-toned, it also lacks contrast and color. I suggest toning down the light, adding some more effective colors, maybe just do a gradient map to give it some color. For most part its whited out, the text could use some fixing up to. It needs alot of adjustments. I know you can do better. 5/10. _________________
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adsertif123 Sophisticated Penguin

Age : 13 Joined : 03 Feb 2008 Posts : 9893 Location : Press Ctrl+W to have a popup of my exact location! Infractions : 0 Credits : 70 Status : 400 posts until Cj
| Subject: Re: Into the Light! Sat Jul 19, 2008 11:03 am | |
| | Flubby wrote: | Its not your best Cj. Too bright, mono-toned, it also lacks contrast and color. I suggest toning down the light, adding some more effective colors, maybe just do a gradient map to give it some color. For most part its whited out, the text could use some fixing up to. It needs alot of adjustments. I know you can do better. 5/10. |
Same opinion exactly, too bright could use a GM. _________________
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